The following poem was voiced by my four year old during her first camping trip this past week.
do you see my fire ladies
where are they going
they’re going to hold up the world
the world is falling down
Eliminating punctuation and capitalization is characteristic of my personal poetic style, but I think it’s appropriate here because I didn’t fully understand some of the relationships here. After some thought, I decided I didn’t want to know. I like the mystery.
very interesting… I’ll be pondering this poem.